Part 1
Straight into protagonist Eve Seles’s dream. She is in the garden of Eden and sees the messianic light behind a snake, along with Eliyahu Hanavi in a chariot. She sees a couple in the garden, Adam and Eve who are close to being perfected (ie resolved of their sin.) The snake represents God when straight (like a staff,) but the evil inclination when coiled. Overall the snake is transformative. It flies over a waterfall but is not injured when it lands on a rock (a miracle.) It is completely straight during its flight with the messianic light following it. Another couple is seen at the end of a dream and represents Eve Seles and her bride to be Jai Shimon (the messiah) who she meets and helps ascend various planes of existence (hidden worlds.) Eve wakes up just as the snake bites her (she is looking at a projection of herself in the dream.)

* new pic notes:
In Eden (pic 1), there are classes and discussions taking place of highly evolved souls. Also, this is a third eye vision, not an imaginary idea – an actual place to be visited later. However, when the snake leaves Eden, the dream becomes that of Earth with the waterfall. Additionally, the snake differs from that of the original serpent. Hence the snake is a dream symbol. Also, the Magen David is shown, but not a default fixture amongst these inhabitants – they have no idol worship, including that of symbols or representations of either themselves or the creator.

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(note the pic above is of a male.. for this story it is a female: Eve Seles)

When Eve wakes up, she sees an image on her body of the Tzimtzum that Eve in the garden had on her body (see pic 1.) She looks in the mirror but the tattoo can’t be seen – it is a figment of her imagination.. or rather her third eye is perceiving something residing in a spiritual plane.

Note: part of the tikkun (correction) to bring in the messianic light is freeing female archangels that have been enslaved in spiritual worlds. Eve sees one of these, Lilith, in her dream. These archangels even have physical counterparts: the planets of the solar system.

The reason why all these corrections didn’t occur in Part 5 is that the archangels aren’t inherently evil, so couldn’t be destroyed: they still must be corrected. Also, due to the vast increase in the number of Klal Israel due to the inclusion of all the tribes of Israel, there is still a lack of Torah focus in the world, I suppose that is the final problem to be corrected.

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Relevant Quotes:

The Essence of Pesach & Our Job at the End of Time

40:55: “Take the staff in your hand, throw it down it, becomes a snake because the staff represents the power of God.. the snake also exists because of the power of God.. God says pick it up.. it becomes a staff… it can be destroyed because there is no snake, it has no power to exist.”

The Fall of the Dark Age

25:16: “Seeing a beautiful goddess in chains, contained inside this bubble, constantly being tortured, mutilated, brutalized, victimized… disgusting things happen to a goddess.. strapped upon this demonic structure… she was all about light-bringing. Saturnia was demonized by these soul rebellions, they would completely vandalize God’s loving creation.”
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alternative title: Let There Be Light


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✓ 6 years ago

OK1 / OK2 / OK 3 – alternative locations for Michael and Seth or Rivka and Sarah.

Throwback: Jerusalem, March 2006, Mea She’arim, Purim Festival

This religious suburb of Jerusalem can be used as a location for either of the two conversation scenes linked above. For Purim, Michael and Seth could be drunk (as part of the tradition.) Alternatively, Rivka and Sarah can be doing their walk on Purim in Tsfat. This will add atmosphere to the scene and they can also be drunk.




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OK3 – New introduction scene (prior to Velox,) or it could be inserted into OK1 as part of its intro and set the stage for the entire series.

This scene is set in the holy city of Tsfat and is similar to Seth and Michael’s scene. The conversation and setting is important but the characters are not really developed. It follows 2 girls, Rivka (religious) and Sarah (secular) who are on Birthright Israel who walk downhill from the Ha-Ari Askenazi Synagogue to the Ari Mikve that borders on the cemetery (both in Tsfat.) The Mikve is a spring-fed dipping pool that is said to have life-enhancing properties and has been used for hundreds of years. The girls don’t go into the pool building – it is basically reserved for men. The scene also familiarizes the audience with rural northern Israel. Tsfat is nearby to Peki’in where the cave of Shimon Bar Yohai is located (OK5.) That town is on the other side of Mt Meron (3rd last pic.)

 

[note: these pics were taken almost 15 years ago. The 4th pic shows a view of Lake Tiberias – where the other holy city of Tiveria lies. Other holy cities in Israel are Jerusalem and Hebron]

Sarah: My dad is always talking about finding a cure for ageing, like that should be a thing anyway?
Rivka: Gilgul, reincarnation is to accelerate soul learning
Sarah: So death is cool, right?
Rivka: Well, it’s not this monster bad thing
Sarah: But who thinks like that?
Rivka: For many religious Jews, death is about “cashing in” on your good deeds and making it into Olam Haba
Sarah: Olam Haba?
Rivka: The world-to-come
Sarah: You’d have to do a lot of good to get there
Rivka: A long-life would help…
Sarah: ohh right. The Essenes I read lived around 120 years, imagine that?
Rivka: How?
Sarah: They harvested ormus from the dead sea
Rivka: You have these people that want to cheat death. They only cheat themselves.
Sarah: K. I’ll tell dad
Rivka: More than that, a long-life with no growth in spirituality could see immensely troubled times. You need conscience.
Sarah: And the whole world should lift up together.
[they pass some guys coming out of the pool complex]

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Sarah: By the way, I think there is a ton of ormus coming through that spring [points to the pool complex]
Rivka: I learn so much from you [touches Sarah’s shoulder]

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Perfect System (OK2) + Crimson and Clover – dialogue expansion

– this is to prepare the audience for the miracle of the burning bush over Mount Moriah later in OK2, the increased lifespans after OK3 (Civilization Day,) and the miracles in OK5.
–  Michael and Seth were known to each other in the Jewish tradition, with Michael being an archangel and Seth being the child of Adam and Eve (and a forefather of Noah.)

– these two pics were taken directly from the OK2 storyboard (now offline)

Walking back behind some students (Seth and Michael) in the old city:

Seth: Michael, every person I speak to wants the messiah but I don’t think people worldwide are ready to see all the open miracles that would come during this time.
Michael: Right. A third temple and then what, 1000 years of righteousness? As if..
Seth: Well, really it’s not if but when..
Michael: And how….

– new dialogue added. The pair walk into an empty classroom waiting for a teacher to arrive, or the back room of a synagogue to further the discussion (second pic.)

Seth: You know, in the mishnah it says there were 10 standing open miracles during the temple period, the first temple at least.. [** source see below]
Michael: What were they again Seth?
Seth: Ahh, flies weren’t landing on the sacrificed animals — all the blood and guts, a giant abattoir – and no flies anywhere… and another that even on windy days, smoke rose vertically off the altar
Michael: So if all our patriarchs lived for hundreds of years.. was that a miracle too?
Seth: Ha, I should know, Seth lived for 912 years, right? Miracle or not, I can’t say I’m not open to that right now!
Michael: Me too. Think of all the lovely friends we’ll make in that time [slightly elbows him]
Seth: But you’d have to be an absolute freak of nature to live that long today
Michael: More than a freak. You’d be breaking with nature.
Seth: A miracle then. But back then, it was the norm
Michael: So a bit of both perhaps. The real question, is whether there is an actual mechanism in the human body to live that long?
Seth: Well, if there is, it’s dormant. But you gotta have faith Mikey

[at that point that see a stray cat rummaging through a bin, it finds a fish carcass and runs away with it – there are many such cats in Jerusalem]

[“the density of cats in Jerusalem is the highest ever recorded anywhere in the world — about 2,000 cats per square kilometer” – pic source]

Seth: Cause and effect can only take you so far.
Michael: Yep, you gotta dial in to the the real cause [looks up to the sky after  seeing the shadow of a real-life eagle overhead – not like the imaginary one from OK1. It could be an actual Golden Eagle or any listed here]
Seth: The eternal platform …of cause and effect
Michael: Yess, fist-bump [fist-bump]

Note: the pair can walk passed a religious wedding, and see an older pair next to them whilst they are talking. See pics above, taken over 10 years.

עיט זהוב מקנן בנגב Golden Eagle Nesting in Israel

[These same two can then be seen near Jai Shimon when he discovers the ark in OK5]

Michael: That’s not archaeology, it’s Arch-angel-ology.
Seth: Believing really is seeing!

** Rabbi Dovid Gottlieb – Rav Desler Nature Miracles Part 1 (26:15)
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Chalice of Malice
– character development of homeless man (Frank)

This scene shows Frank (single homeless man) stop on his way back from the soup van to talk to a couple of street performers near the shrine. One is a guy playing djembe to Bob Marley’s War, another is an aboriginal girl dancing to it and selling t-shirts and incense (or anything else.) They are also collecting tips in a hat.

Frank is wearing his Vietnam war bomber jacket. He was a Royal Australian Air Force (RAAF) helicopter pilot during the Vietnam war. This is part of the reason he sleeps near the shrine.

Jeff: [djembe player]: Hey mon
Frank: Ahh hi again
Lenah: Don’t let ’em bad boys bring you down
Frank: I never did [putting his hands in his jacket pocket – he was never shot down while flying and he is proud of it. Note he is using past tense – he is to be murdered later. He was a hero during the war and saved many injured soldiers.]
[Jeff takes some money out of the hat and throws it to him]
Frank: Cheers for that [He salutes them – see pic above]
Lenah: Dance with me Digger [Lenah starts dancing with Frank]
Frank: Well I could use a nurse right now, I’m always ill
Lenah: Time heals all wounds doesn’t it?
Frank: That’s what they say
Lenah: You just gotta find the right beat, ay
Frank: I’ve never heard them say that
Lenah: They don’t know
[shot of a random helicopter flying overhead]
[Frank points to the helicopter, then to his jacket’s insignia and some medals]

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Frank: Number 9 Squadron – I was flying insertions and extractions
Lenah: So we have a hero in our midst?
Frank: How does that saying go “Legends never die and ”
Lenah: “..heroes live forever. ” Is that true?
Frank: We’ll have to wait and see [winks – walking off]

At this point the song “War” by Bob Marley which was playing on their speaker becomes a proper background track as he keeps walking. “War” quotes from one of Haile Selassie’s most famous speeches. The lyric:

“Until the color of a man’s skin
Is of no more significance than the color of his eyes
Me say war”

Can be clearly heard to indicate Lenah and Jeff are solid friends. [can closeup on the eyes]

When the murder of the other couple and the mother takes place, this song keeps playing and there is a cut to Lenah and Jeff jamming in the street in another part of the city – or someone listening to this song on a sidewalk.

Really, wars take place over scarce resources and can easily happen between tribes of the same ethnic group. Any form of difference can be leveraged by a warmonger such as Redd White.

Bob Marley - War (Audio)

By having music occur over the murders, it likens to the Godfather with murders taking place during an opera:

The real message here is that the war culture pervades everything and anyone can die from it – no one is immune. People think that because they are not in the armed forces, they are free from it – this is not true. People are always fighting over something and there is always collateral damage. The main solution is through good communication and finding common ground. Music is one avenue to do that.

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Ormus King
– special notes on flying
– new story idea

Following the Twurp’s Burps disclosure, (OK1) designs and instructions were released to the public to build ormus detectors and levitators. This coupled with Civilization Day (Jerusalem pyramid + David’s Cube OK2+3) meant quite a radical change to society. 30% of people could and did fly occasionally (5% very often,) but 70% couldn’t or wouldn’t. It was difficult to fly and many people just couldn’t do it. It was a bit like wiggling one’s small toes or moving one’s ears – no matter how hard you try, you just can’t do it.

There was a lot of crime around flying: theft, kidnap, murder and arson became much easier as trespass was simple: just fly over a fence. Also, people became jealous of flyers who had simpler and more efficient lives (and coupled with the fear of crime) “flyer bash squads” formed. Thus it was dangerous to fly. Also, drones could attack you.



Titles could be.. Ormus King (4.5 / 5) :
Freefall: When you fly, you die
Certain Death: Only the grounded survive

…it could focus on a developing nation whose current regime turns murderous (eg Khmer Rouge Killing Fields) and has flyers seek refuge in all ends of the Earth to escape death. This is because some group reverse-engineers the levitator design and finds a way to disable it mid-flight and they can do this via satellite. But once you fly, you are also deemed a target for life. A group of flyers seek to disable these satellites and bring justice to all. The satellites may also be used by governments to obtain taxes from flyers for licenses to use the levitators which would otherwise be disabled. Perhaps the government system gets hijacked by the terrorists.. who can be aliens — that’s the plot twist. There could also be a drama/romance situation between a flyer and non-flyer and show tensions between family members as not all members of a family can fly or want to.

As mentioned, Civilization Day didn’t reduce evil even if it did increase ecological and human health dramatically. Flying did help with search and rescue, but ultimately, I suppose, the flyers may have had to create a breakaway civilization. Alternatively, people may have invented weapons to cripple flyers in mid-flight. Also, flying may have required special licenses like owning a gun and it was heavily and easily regulated.

It would be interesting to create a story simply about the implications of flying in this post Civilization Day world. (OK 4.5)


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In OK4, the main dream doesn’t need to have any flying in it at all. The dream is of a pre-Civilization Day world – something audiences will identify with. In OK5, the Rever and Orbs make flying impossible, and when the first orb appears people can start dropping out of the sky. An interesting first scene on Earth would be to have a flyer drop out of the sky as she’s flying into a two-storey house in Beverly Hills.


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Alternatively, OK1 can be modified so that in the Twurp’s Burps disclosure, in the last minute the Levitator Device information isn’t released. The data got corrupted somehow, or Twurp deleted it, and the possibility of flying was completely removed from the world (only the ormus detector info was published.)

In another scenario, the whole planet (~95%) of people could start flying and that would be another situation worth exploring.

An Ormus King 7 would involve angels and demons from the bible and be set in an imaginary world. It could show upper worlds responding to events in the Earthly realm and highlight exactly how the righteousness prevails on Earth. This is said to occur anyway with or without a temple due to mitzvot (Torah law.) Ascended Masters and biblical heroes could also be presented.
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